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Metal Horses

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Metal Horses


Ages ago, hooves of bestial beauty
pounded upon the soil of old.
O'er time hooves of a different kind
grind against the black rock still new.

Glistening hides, splashed with rain,
sparkling sweet and dashed with debris.
Curving bodies, sculptured lovingly by greater hands,
sturdy frames and bulky power.

Twisting.
Winding.
Turning.
Stampeding down a lone stretch of rock
or
Nose to end in a crawling trot.

Rhythmic movements, roaring souls,
crashing through the concrete forest.
Metal trees and dizzying spires
of cataclysmic steel and stone.

The one of age renders useless this land,
poisoning our mother's breath with each belching puff.
Pouring ebony milk down to feed its sensational greed,
to tear apart our dying land.

Now listen child, and you may hear,
the bleating call of nature's wild.
An untamed spirit, racing on,
their flickering ghosts reflecting in our clouded eyes.

But, alas, my child,
Oh, it pains me so!
That many can not hear,
for their hearts have long since withered,
returning to the dust of the hopeless and the </i>lost.</i>

Their hearts have withered,
souls wrought to die
all from the acidic birth of technology

So please, my child,
my loving child,
my gifted child,
who sees through lies and corruption.
Look past the endless ribbons of black,
heavily splashed with the kaleidoscope of colors.
Look past, look hard, look often, my child,
and see past our metal horses.
Okay. I made this when I was in my last year of Highschool, when I was 18 years old. Frankly, this was one of my personal favorites. This was actually PUBLISHED in the school's literary magazine they have.

The story behind this one is I used to help out the Art Museum for free, for three years, two Saturdays out of the month. I always hated the ride there-- the roads where choaked with cars, and I absolutely dispise them (despite being handy for everyone to get to places) because of what they do to our enviroment. I had a lone scrap of paper on me when I jotted this entire thing down- with my handy cracked pencil- in about three minutes before my shift started.

I get inspired like that.

Now, to clarify things... People ask what this poem is about. Yes, it's cars. Cars have replaced out horses, so to speak. Horses used to roam free in the time of the young world. Now? Not anymore. The pastures are now gritty slabs of pavement, and the world's not as bright and lusterous as it once was. I still love the world, don't get me wrong, but nowadays I weep for it.

And yes, this is supposed to be like some grandfather saying this to a child, or even a Native American(?). I blame my Native American blood coming into this one...
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wolvenspirit13's avatar
omigosh that's awesome :D I wrote a poem once about the elements of nature think I should upload it on here??